After submitting our draft 2 we received video feedback from our teacher, going over areas that worked and areas for improvement, we picked up the following from this;
- Good mise en scene and shot variety
- Good energy and pace of edit, conveying a relevant level of energy
- “It just works”, successful in having a good flow and purpose
- Use more closeups of the board and telephone
- Generally fill in gaps, especially the gap at the beginning
- Use a faster editing pace from 0:12 onward
- Amend export settings
To summarise, we could emphasise and give more power to the editing in places by using faster paced cuts, as well as needing to make sure we have a more of the song as a whole completed, maintaining high energy throughout.