This is my new improved cover for my pop magazine. I have listened to my peer media students feedback and made the appropriate changes to my magazine:

• I re-positioned and added more text to the my cover including pugs, headlines and quotes from my star.
• I changed fonts and added more bright colours to my magazine so that it would become more attractive to my target audience.
• I feel like the colour choices fit my genre as well as my fonts are feminine and elegant similar to the mise-en-scene used for my model.

From making the changes to my magazine I hope that I have successfully improved the front cover to my magazine and will attract my target audience. However although I am happy with the big improvements I’ve made to my cover, I still feel like:

• the image on the front of my cover isn’t the best image I could of chosen as I feel the star does not look confident and empowered which is the key message I want to get across through my magazine.
• Next I will change my photo and background to fit my mise-en-scene I wanted to achieve.