After listening to all my feedback on my first draft of my double page spread, I have created a new improved version with all the appropriate changes I needed to make. Some of the changes I made to my double page spread are:
- Increasing the saturation of the photo so it’s more bright and interesting.
- Adding shapes and borders to make the pages more attractive to the audience.
- Changing fonts and colours to fit theme of my magazine.
- Making quotes larger or bold to make them noticed by audience.
- Adding page numbers and By Line.
This is my new version:
Overall, I am reasonably pleased with my double page spread however there are still a few changes I would like to make to it.
The next changes I would like to make to my double page spread would be:
- Adding a by line to credit the photographer of the photo.
- Changing the colour of quotes to white
- Bring my model down in the picture
- Making my stand first stand out as it’s an introduction to the article but doesn’t stand out enough.