Draft Feature Article

I’ve decided that the article I’m writing for my double page spread is going to be a Q&A on Disco artist Holly Neill, but before I do this I need to make a plan as to what I’m going to be writing.

This is the plan I wrote.

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These are some of the question that will be asked in the Q&A:

Holly, how did you learn to sing in the first place?

  • My mum was a music teacher and as we traveled round, she taught at different schools is different countries as well as giving me my own lessons along the way, I found I picked up singing quite quickly as I had at least one lesson a day wherever we happened to be.

What are your plans for the future?

  • I don’t have many plans for the future, I would love to go on tour though to explore and go back to the places I once lived to preform there to the fans I may have left behind.

When do you hope to do your next live performance?

  • I hope I can do my next live performance soon as doing it over an internet live video is a pain and I would love and prefer to meet my fans in person as it means more to me and probable them. We are coping with what we have though so we are doing the best we can to make sure the fans don’t miss out, even in a global pandemic.

First draft!

  • After I had planned what I wanted to write my article about, I made a draft of all the text I wanted to include on a Google Doc.

My first draft.

Next to make sure it makes sense and that I’ve made no mistakes I read this aloud while recording it to insure no mistakes were made. I then listened back to the recording while editing my original draft to insure that it all made sense.

After listing to this I read threw it many other times and picked out the bits I liked and the bits I feel needed tweaking to make sure they made sense and that its readable.

This is my second draft.

This is my new draft for the moment but this may change in the near future if I feel it’s still needs tweaking.

 

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