Draft 3 of our Music Video

To insure we could improve our music video we asked for some feedback from our peers. We created a second draft and asked them what they thought went well and what we need to improve on. After receiving this feedback, we created a third draft which is below as well as a list of feedback.

Peer Feedback

Targets for improvement

• Color correction could really bring out the contrasting colors in our video so we need to give this technique a go.
• Using a variety of shots would also benefit our video so this is something we need to incorporate.
• We need to make sure our lip syncing is as good as possible by adjusting a few clips.
• We need to ensure all of our flashbacks are introduced correctly so that the narrative makes sense

What has changed

• With our flashbacks we’ve added more ‘black-in’s’ to make sure our audience know that these clips are flashbacks
• We have arranged clips that were out of time, to be in time so all the lip syncing works.
• We have included more ‘zoom-ins’ on some of the longer shots.
• Lastly, we completed another shoot at Grande Rocques Castle to ensure we have a variety of shots that we can use if we need.