Music Video – Draft 1 Evaluation

After creating the first draft of our music video we needed to gather some feedback in order to help us improve upon the current version of the music video. We enlisted the help of a fellow student who fit in the target audience of our music video and who listed to this genre of music.

We sat down the student to watch through the entire length of our first draft and asked him to take down some notes, including anything he felt that needed to be changed or tweaked. Once the video had finished we asked if we could film the feedback in which he was going to give.

Below is our feedback for our first music video draft.

After analyzing the feedback given above, along with some anecdotal feedback, we as a group have agreed upon some targets in preparation for our second draft. These targets are:

• More narrative is needed
• The performance at the end is too long of a clip
• Needs to have edits to the beat
• The narrative needs to be more clear

From the feedback we can confidently say that we are on the right path to creating the music video we wanted. Next we need to use the feedback given to use in order to create a second draft so that come receiving feedback for that draft we are able to make final tweaks and create our final, finished music video.