Music Video – Draft 2

After receiving the feedback from our first draft of the music video we changed a number of things within the music video.

Firstly we colour corrected the narrative to be darker when with the Mona Lisa painting, this is because we were told that the shots were to light and not sinister enough. We also colour corrected the narrative where he is following the female character to black and white as we felt this help to differentiate the performance from the narrative, as some found the transactions were not enough.

Secondly we changed the narrative and added some to the end of the performance, from our feedback we were told that the ending was way too long, so to break up the final section of the performance we added some narrative.

Finally we changed the performance, we edited the shots to the beat a lot more effectively, each cut taking place every other full beat. This added pace to the performance and made it fit the song better than our previous performance.

To see our second draft of our music video, watch the video below.

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