This is my second draft for my double page spread. After doing my location shoot and making a first draft for my double page spread, I looked back at my targets and edited what needed to be changed to make my DPS the best it can be.
Things that I have edited are:
- the fonts – I used a different range of fonts to add more variety to the pages.
- I added my article instead of using placeholder text so that there is now relevant and interesting text for the readers to read.
- Edited the main image on Photoshop.
(click on image to see bigger).
My Targets:
- quote stands out…perhaps add another one?
- enlarge the main photo so that Max shirt is off as there is a lot of white and we need more of Izzy and Max face
- continued needs to be a bit separate so that it doesn’t look like it is part of the copy – different font?
- caption the inset or do you have one of them in a different costume?
- leave some space between questions as it is quite crowded
- could the questions be even larger size?
- lower case F in From
- typo article