As part of the editing process of our thriller we constructed a second draft which showcased our thriller with titles. We added in all of the necessary titles such as the producers, actors and also the main title. When creating our titles we had to take into consideration the length that the titles are on screen, the positioning of the titles, the animation and the size/font of the titles.

We showed another group our draft 2 and then conducted an interview in order to obtain their feedback. Adam Guille and Olivia Le Friec gave us feedback on how they thought the fonts, positioning, animations etc.

Below is the interview:

Targets that I have constructed based on the interviews:

  • Ensure that the titles are placed in the best position.
  • Ensure that all titles are bold and easily visible .
  • Ensure that all animations are the same (except the main title).

In summary of the interview we will have to re-position some of the titles and alter the time that they are on screen. It is also a good idea to make sure that all titles are of the correct font, size and animation.

We also received other pieces of feedback which can be seen below:

  • Make use of a different effect for the opening shot?

  • Employ more interesting animations for the titles

  • Have the main title on screen for long enough

  • Maintain the final shot for longer