The first thing I altered on my double page spread was the title name, it was originally ‘Double Page Spread’ I changed it to ‘Girls On Tour’ to give it a sense of realism and to give the audience some specification of whats happening. Furthermore I then decided to add in some shapes with low opacity and layered them behind the text columns to make it easier to read, in addition to that I then changed the captioned image to an image more relevant to the article. It appeared that there was still too much space on the left page so I decided to enlarge my main star image as it as too small.