Draft 6 25/01/19
Targets from Miss Hales:
Front cover:
- Line up cover lines and images
- Capital letters
- Masthead should be unique
- Cover line further away from edge
- Pug text should be more central and angle it
- Not to sure about ‘2019 hip-hop cash kings’
- crop inset image
Contents page:
- Fonts hard to read
- Simpler font for subheadings
- Writings to close to edge
- No hyphenated words – leave on one line
- Gold to hard to read at bottom
- Contents different font
Double page spread:
- Image looks stretched
- Move byline
- Big pull quote
- Image bigger with headline over
- Outline heads
- Crop image
- Line up article
After reading the alterations, I went back to my pages and changed all that needed to be changed however some of the comments Miss Hales made I kept as I believe once I changed some of the other things that the rest that I didn’t change worked quite well.