Targets from Miss Hales: 

Front cover: 

• Line up cover lines and images
• Capital letters
• Masthead should be unique
• Cover line further away from edge
• Pug text should be more central and angle it
• Not to sure about ‘2019 hip-hop cash kings’
• crop inset image

Contents page:

• Fonts hard to read
• Simpler font for subheadings
• Writings to close to edge
• No hyphenated words – leave on one line
• Gold to hard to read at bottom
• Contents different font

Double page spread:

• Image looks stretched
• Move byline
• Big pull quote
• Image bigger with headline over
• Outline heads
• Crop image
• Line up article

After reading the alterations, I went back to my pages and changed all that needed to be changed however some of the comments Miss Hales made I kept as I believe once I changed some of the other things that the rest that I didn’t change worked quite well.