For this draft I had to upload my most up to date pages and was assigned a partner who was marking my work, in doing this it has allowed me to see the pros and cons of my pages in the eyes of my target audience, this trial has helped me develop my pages and really consider many factors that have helped me create the pages I have today.

For these pages I have moved the plugs on the front cover so that they are not so close to the edge. I also edited the font of the text to make it different from the masthead, furthermore have added in a pug instead of having loads of plugs to give the page a sense of individuality. On my contents page I had already corrected the spelling mistake on ‘exclusive’ My feedback was more positives then negatives meaning there wasn’t much to change, however I can discuss the skills I have learnt from allowing someone else to view my work. Just the simple changes such as moving the plugs away from the edge really entices the readers more as the plugs are more visible and easy to read. A big skill I have managed to accomplish whilst drafting my pages is simply knowing the best composition of my text and images in a way that wouldn’t disrupt the viewers eyes. Going back to my first draft to my most recent has most definitely made me realise that the skills I have obtained along the way have been extremely beneficial.