This is the second draft of my double page spread for my music magazine which is for the genre of pop.

I decided when I created my first draft that I needed a more interesting background so I went onto pinterest to gain some inspiration and that is where I found the background that I decided to go for. I also added in another insert because in the brief that we were given, we had to include at least 4 images that we had taken ourselves and in my first draft, I had only included 3.

What has changed

• Changed the background to something more interesting.
• Changed the cover star because I wanted to cut it out better but I no longer had the same image so it needed changing, but I am  happier with the image that I have chosen.
• Changed the heading because I didn’t have a photo of a man and the headline was a love story.
• Added the interesting facts and the boarder around it.
• Added another insert to make sure that my magazine fitted the brief of having 4 images that I had taken.
• Changed the font of the headline so that it fitted better with the rest of the page.
• Added who the photograph was by.
• Added the page numbers.