Below are my three pages that I believe to be my final ones. I may need to change some of them slightly but nothing major. I have left these pages here so that a fellow media student can give me some feedback which will be my final improvement.

Holly said that she likes the MES of my front cover because it shows off the personality of the artist that I am trying to portray. She said that my artist has a natural but bold statement in the MES.

To improve, Holly said that I should add a bold lip to my model in photoshop to  add to the vibrant colours than run through my magazine. She also said to make sure that the writing in the plug is fully in the circle.

Holly said that dressing the models in all black implies that they have a sense of fierceness about them and confidence. Her slick back pony adds a sense of maturity to the page as some people may think that pop magazines are for the younger audience.

She said that I should add some colour to Allan’s t-shirt as my magazine is includes vibrant colours and the white t-shirt doesn’t really suit the MES. Holly said to put my page numbers on the right hand side as it would allow my magazine to flow better and be more conventional.

Holly said that the varied hairstyles on my model show a differentiation within my magazine and perhaps leads onto a differentiation within the artist and her music.

To improve, Holly said that I should set my paragraph settings to make them straight on both sides as it will make the article look slightly better. She said that I should make the writing in the yellow box smaller so that the box itself looks neater. She also said to make my title in the yellow box smaller as it looks quite squished right now.

Below is the embedded document that Holly wrote on with more comments and feedback that she gave me on the 3 pages of my music magazine.