I have decided to edit and adapt all 3 of my pages for my magazine for the final time and when I have finished they will be my final product. This is because I want all 3 of my pages to look exactly how I want them to and how I had originally envisioned them to. Below is my improved front cover, contents page and double page spread along with what I have changed about them and why.

This is the final version of my front cover and I am very happy with it because I feel like I have got my genre across in the correct light.

The things that I have changed are;

• Added some more color to the cover lines and the plug at the top.
• Made the box at the bottom bigger, which then meant that I had to move the barcode  and the price higher.
• Made the ‘top 10 styles’ bigger so that it was easier to read and had more effect.
• Added the Ariana grande poster bit to fill some empty space in the top right hand corner.
• Changed the simply in the masthead to white instead of red so that it went better wit the other colors and the background.
• Made my star image bigger to fill more of the space and make her more central.

This is my improved contents page which I am happy with because I like the style and the MES of my model.

The things that I have changed are;

• I added a plug to attract more attention towards my magazine.
• I made the number pages bigger than the cover lines to add definition to them and make them stand out.
• I added dots either side of my ‘contents’ to make it more bold.
• I added a small logo of my magazine which I got from the masthead from my front cover.
• I changed the shade of pink to make it match my front cover and make them work together a bit more.
• I changed some of the cover lines to make them more about music and my genre.

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This is the improved draft of my double page spread and this is my favorite page of my magazine because I love the background and the layout of it.

The things that I have changed are;

• Changed the background to something more interesting.
• Changed the cover star because I wanted to cut it out better but I no longer had the same image so it needed changing, but I am  happier with the image that I have chosen.
• Changed the heading because I didn’t have a photo of a man and the headline was a love story.
• Added the interesting facts and the boarder around it.
• Added another insert to make sure that my magazine fitted the brief of having 4 images that I had taken.
• Changed the font of the headline so that it fitted better with the rest of the page.
• Added who the photograph was by.
• Added the page numbers.