Mrs Cobb looked through all 3 pages of my music magazine and created a screen castify that included the tips and targets that she thought would make my magazine reach the potential that it deserves.
Front cover;
- More block writing like the one in the top right hand corner.
- Make the bottom banner bigger and bolder like the one in the corner.
- Jazz up the background more to make it less plain.
- Make ‘Simply pop’ bigger.
- Make the writing inside the pug more center in the circle.
- Move the pug.
- Move the big cover line away from Dani’s face. Change sizing of the cover lines to make them look better.
- Put more cover lines on her shoulder.
- Change the spelling of Beiber.
Contents page;
- Jazz up the background more to make it less plain.
- Make Emilia bigger.
- Make contents smaller.
- Make ‘simply pop’ the same as on the front cover.
- Put a page number on the bottom of the page.
- Sort out the cover lines as they look messy.
- Add a block of color.
- Bring white into it.
Double page spread;
- Bring page numbers down.
- Who is the article by?
- Make facts about Dani more interesting. E.g. color and boarders.
- Articles need to finish at the same place.
- Put quote by her face on the right.
- Change font of headline.
- Add stand fist.
- Keep spaces between paragraphs.
- Cut her hair out better in the right photo.