These are the final pages of my magazine. I sat down with my teacher and she gave me one-to-one feedback about what final things I could improve on and the final little tweaks that would make my magazine great.

Things to improve;

• Move the plug are to make sure it is in the correct place as it look a bit odd and out of place.
• Sort out the box at the bottom as the writing is coming off a bit, maybe make it smaller.
• Make the Ariana Grande poster less bare and plain.
• Change all of the ‘and’ to ‘&’.

Targets to improve;

• Add something at the bottom of Emilia’s legs to fill the space.
• Make the spaces between the lines clearer as some of them look a bit off.
• Make the plug more interesting, maybe add a boarder?

Targets to improve;

• Make the quotations more interesting as they look rather plain.
• Make ‘2018’ in the masthead more vibrant.
• Change the colour of ‘simply’ in my masthead to make it match my other pages.
• Add the blue lines around the yellow box to make a boarder.