This is the second draft of our music video, this draft shows the narrative that we’ve added however, this video needs to be worked on a lot more and here are some of our targets and what went well in the video…

What went well in our video…

• More varied shots were added
• Applied narrative shots
• Developed our editing skills

What we need to change and work on…

• More footage needs to be filmed
• Setting change to gather more narrative etc
• Add effects and more contrast of editing
• More varied camera angles and shots need to be used

Teacher development targets…

• More connection to the star through different shots, close ups needed to show intimacy
• Play with the colours in the studio shots to make them more interesting
• More edit to the beat – more pace in the edit
• More of the narrative spaceman

Below is the screencastify of improvements from the teacher…

https://drive.google.com/file/d/1KELbw6OOi3xZIk6gTOB80jITk2U0PTUa/view