Below is the first draft of my contents page. I created my contents page on in design and when making it I considered all of the typical conventions of a contents page within my genre. It is very important to consider these things so that my target market is interested by my magazine. I included images, bright colours and big bold headline.

Going Forward

Going forward I will definitely take into consideration the thoughts of my peers so that my contents page can be as good as possible. It is important to listen to constructive criticism when making a magazine or lots of things so that it can be attractive to as many people as possible, especially your target audience.

Targets For My Next Draft

. Use a variety of shot distances.

. Change the glittery side panel to my own images.

. Use more key words.

. Make my layout more clean and neat.

. Use headlines for my cover lines.