Below is my redesigned contents page:

Peer assesment:

• Good colour scheme – red bars match t-shirt stripe
• Magazine name reference – matches page format
• Model cutout – Clean cutout picture
• Page layout – well put together
• Inside – Dark outline potentially

I made a lot of changes from the previous version, those changes were:

• Flipped my picture of Jake to face him the other way
• Added a split colour scheme
• Added 2 red bars – one solid along the bottom right and one fading going up from the horizontal red bar
• Changed the size font and colour of the word ‘Inside’ at the top of the page above Jake
• Changed the font and colour of the rest of the page to match the ‘Inside’ at the top of the page
• Added two more feature articles to fill space on the features pages list
• Added a ‘Latest News’ section at the top of the page to give the reader insights and snippets on the high profile contents and its page number

These changes helped develop my contents page from looking like a bland, unconventional blue page to a contents page that looks more conventional and authentic, presenting the Hip Hop genre better as it is still simple but it is bold and catches potential readers eyes.