After lots of adjusting and adding colours, here is my second draft of my contents page …

What I have changed:

• I changed the whole colour scheme from blue to red. I feel as though this matches my front cover a lot more than draft 1 did.
• I added the masthead to the top of the page to advertise my brand
• Added red boxes around my page numbers so they stand out from my background
• Added a red gradient to the background/border of my images to match the red gradient on my front cover and to tie in with the rest of the red on the page.
• Changed the page number colours to white.

Making these changes, I have made the page more intriguing to the reader and nicer to look at. As it matches well with my front cover, this should draw the reader in so they find out what they can explore within my magazine.

Here is a voice recording from a classmate, Millie, analysing my new improved contents page.