We have finally completed our second draft of our music video! Here is our second draft –

In my opinion this video is very different to our first draft which I think is a good thing as it proves how far we’ve come, especially with ideas regarding editing.

What I particularly like about this video;

• We learnt how to use an adjustment layer so all of our pink shots have the exact same colour tones on them, which I think looks really effective and brightens the clips more as now looking back at the first draft it was very bland and grey.
• We added all of the summer shoot footage that we got which I think adds a really bright vibe to the video and advances the technology used a lot by using the drone to collect effective performance shots from above.
• We zoomed in on a lot of our shots, especially the teddy bear ones, to fill the frame more rather than having empty space.

Targets for next draft;

• Colour correct some, especially close ups, to make them brighter as they are quite dark at the minute
• Remove the shots with the roses as the large area of blue sky contrasts and looks disjunctive alongside all our pink clips and colour scheme.
• Add more narrative shots, to add more anger into the video.
• Sharpen some shots