Here we have the draft 3 of our music video The Love Club

What was changed:

• Edited the outdoor shot to make it less orange/green to make it more pink and cover up the tones of the bush.
• Slightly adjusted some of the clips so they are now more on the beat.

What we are still going to change for draft 4:

• Edit the outdoor shots again using colour wheels to completely remove the colour green from the clip to enhance the colour of her dress and makeup more.
• Remove the clips with the roses as they are too blue for the video, and fill the gaps with a different aesthetic clip

Here is some feedback we got from peers whom commented on our music video giving us advice on what is good and what to improve…

Positive:

-Mise en scene on point

-Good shot variety

-Good pacing of the cut clips

-Love the rose coloured filter on the clips, match the theme and aesthetic

Constructive criticism: 

-Thinks the message portrayed was about ‘going crazy over love’ rather than loving then hating love

-From 2:36 onwards cut the clips more to the beat as they don’t sound like they are to the beat of anything? (However they are meant to be fast paced as she rips the paper to portray anger.)

-2:02 over exposed/saturated filter

I used snipping tool to take a screenshot of the emails the students sent me of the feedback for my video.