I have now completed my second draft of the front cover of my music magazine. I and am inserting it here next to my original front cover to show the changes I have made. The second image (draft 2) links to a pdf so the adjustments I made are more noticable when the image is enlarged

I have made a few change in order to improve the overall look of my magazine. I will now list the changes I made-

• I added an issue and a date
• I made the writing either side of her head slightly smaller so it fits the page better
• Added a subheading to the title ‘meet ruby’ to give the reader more information
• Made the price and barcode slightly smaller
• Spaced out a few of the letters from the masthead so it is more ledgible