For the last piece of feedback on our music video, we thought we would carry out a more in depth process. Therefore, we decided we would film two of our peers watch our video, while commenting on things they think work well and elements that could be improved. We believed that this would be one of the most effective methods of feedback and therefore we decided to leave it until last. Simply, we believed this due to the fact that the viewer can comment on things as the video plays and therefore they can say whatever comes to their mind at the time. We felt that this would be very effective and therefore we would be able to efficiently collect the necessary feedback.

We believe this was a very useful piece of feedback and due to this we were able to make the few minor alterations that will improve our video. Upon reviewing our feedback, we looked at the targets we needed to complete, these were;

Targets:

• Change a few of the performance shots, do this so there is no odd ‘leading space’ when we see the performer on the screen.
• Perhaps experiment with the colour of the food colouring we see in the water shots. This will make a much better connection to the rest of the footage/ video.
• Make sure that all the shots run smoothly and there are no strange glitches in the transitions between each individual shot.