Feedback from my first draft:

What can I improve on?

• more interesting font on name if artist, maybe something similar to the masthead
• make the image a little bit bigger so more space is filled with main artist as this is the main feature
• add a price next to the barcode
• try and bet rid of the white background on the masthead

What went well?

• bright colours which suit the genre
• everything is in the right place which makes it conventional