We have:
- Removed studio clips
- Included summer clips
- Added effects
To improve:
- Need to fill in all the blank spaces
- Include some more effects, make the video different but the same to other pop music videos.
We have asked for comments and feedback on our draft 3 and this is what we got:
![](https://blogs.grammar.sch.gg/seannahainsworth/files/2020/10/lucy-feedback.jpg)
![](https://blogs.grammar.sch.gg/seannahainsworth/files/2020/10/kita-feedback.jpg)