What have I changed?

• I have added another colour throughout my magazine, adding the red to all pages.
• I also changed the background on my front cover so it is a gradient and not boxes. As well as this I added a drop shadow on my main cover model.
• I have moved the headline and standfirst on my DPS so it doesn’t get lost in the fold of the spread.
• I also added some small details eg. making the exclusive box on the front cover black, adding an arrow to the end of my DPS to instruct readers to read on and moving Sonny Rain’s name into the blank space to fill it on the contents page.

My teacher gave me some feedback:

• On the contents page, add cover lines under the two headlines without and get rid of the with under most headlines as it’s repetitive.
• Increase the line space on the quotes on the DPS.
• Add text under the last quote on the DPS.
• The standfirst could be bolder.