The feedback given by one of my peers on our 3rd draft of our music video

This feedback really helped my group to gain an insight into what we were achieving in our music video and what needed to be worked upon, there was acknowledgement of the repetitiveness of the day to day life and many other aspects that we were aiming to convey were portrayed efficiently. The feedback we have got to work on was similar to some of the things our group had previously discussed which was beneficial as this feedback made it obvious that we could improve it further. We booked another performance shoot and shot at various angles to get more life into our music video and we also made the clips shorter to make it more interesting and less dreary. Overall this exercise highlighted how our group could improve some finishing touches into our music video.