Critical Reflection essay

  • How do your products represent social groups or issues? 
  • How did your research inform your products and the way they use or challenge conventions? 
  • How do the elements of your production work together to create a sense of ‘branding’? 
  • How do your products engage with the audience?

Throughout producing our music video I learnt a lot about what conventions music videos consist of. In ours, we wanted to portray the star following our mission statement. We started by doing thorough research into Altman’s ‘blueprint’ ideology but, the most valuable research we did was on music video conventions. These included either a narrative, performance or both, the MES, Star Imagery, a soundtrack and a range of camera shots. One music video that I chose to study was Sinead O’Connor’s music video for ‘The emperor’s new clothes’. This music video had a conventional style of it being confessional and in an anonymous studio.

  A key convention we used in our music video was MES. We chose to set our video in the 1950’s and to portray this era we used red lipstick, a petite, winged eyeliner and a spotted dress. This had a huge impact on our Music video as it tied together our addition of the b&w and grained texture in editing, this was to portray the sense of darkness and past time. The next convention we used was a major prop, we encoded our storyline through different camera shots of this prop, conveying its importance. We used a conventional style, from the alternative indie genre, of performance and narrative where the star entered a confessional state in the performance element. We researched Lacey’s ‘repertoire of elements’ and applied the conventions before the production. This included Iconography, which we represented through the use of a pie as our fixed prop, this allowed the storyline to maintain the theme of domestic oppression. We used Lacey’s ‘similarity and difference’ whereby a convention of the Indie genre is for the music video to be bright and colourful, we chose to have our narrative in black and white. 

As a group we produced this mission statement for the basis of our Digipak ‘she is an outspoken individual, who tackles the darker issues in the Indie pop genre that others may not want to address. She pushes the boundaries and creates a unique and immersive environment for her audience’. When we had gathered ideas for our digipak we decided to lean further towards Alternative Indie, we chose to represent the Star Image as noticeably ordinary and relatable. Due to this choice we implied the emotional side of our Star in our commercial marketing campaign.

On the front cover we chose to signify the immersive environment that her music creates through lowkey, chiaroscuro lighting. We decided to imply the emotional side of herself through the Masthead of the Digipak, we used a drop shadow on the polysemic text to imply power and dominance. In our music video she lived a mundane, bleak lifestyle, we represented a similar ideology through the title. ‘Artificial’ is taken from the idea that she feels as though she cannot produce her own happiness. We portrayed her personality using Barthes symbolic code whereby we took three photos to convey her personality and create an ordinary, Dyer, feel to her and her music. At the end of our Digipak we wanted to convey that she is moving on to stardom. We used Barthes Semic code to connote this idea with the use of boxes and surrounding props. We wanted to signify, De Saussure, her desire to create a positive life for herself which is similar to how we represented her character in ‘Me and My husband’. We implied this idea further on the last panel, the pink font represents femininity and the song titles juxtapose that feeling of happiness as they are emotional and raw, ‘Late night emotions’ and ‘ending dream’. 

Social media Pages are forms of commercial marketing campaigns that can be used to create buzz and awareness around the Star. The goals of every marketing campaign include Attraction, Interest, Desire and Action. For a Social Media Page to gain attention it must be attractive by potentially having a colour scheme, it must be interesting and create desire which can be done through behind the scenes posts and merchandise and it must be engaging to create action. Shirky argues that audiences in today’s society like and want to interact with the Media that they are seeing, meaning that if a Star’s SMP is interactive it will be engaging and participative it will gather more interest.

In our SMP we chose a range of photos that represented our Star’s personal life and her political views. Gauntlett argues that the media doesn’t shape, but it reflects our identities. We made our star’s political identity known because we wanted our SMP to gather interest from our desired audience demographic, Hall. We encoded anticipation through the use of a variety of behind the scenes posts to create a buzz and awareness around the music video. We used all of Blumler and Katz’ ‘Uses and Gratification’ theory in many forms. We represented social interaction through a link in the bio of the SMP, this is to forward the audience onto merchandise websites and tour tickets, we used this further through Q and A’s where followers could ask questions. The Star’s Personal identity is conveyed through posts including her friends, animals, feminist ideology posts and a charity post which represents what she stands for. Entertainment in our SMP is portrayed through teasers of the music video and behind the scenes posts, lastly information is given through tour posters and countdowns to her music.

To establish a brand identity for a specific audience demographic from the initial preliminary task my group made the decision that our Star would represent strong, independent and feminist ideologies. We chose to incorporate this idea in our mission statement,‘she is an outspoken individual, who tackles the darker issues in the Indie pop genre that others may not want to address. She pushes the boundaries and creates a unique and immersive environment for her audience’. Although we wanted our Star Image to stand out we also wanted her to remain present and ordinary, Dyer, for her audience so that she could be relatable.

Our music video communicates the ideologies of our mission statement through the narrative storyline. The main character is a signifier, De Saussure, for a woman becoming an individual again, although at the start she is weak and reliant, she becomes strong and faces, what Levi Strauss would argue is, her own binary opposition. The mission statement explains; ‘she pushes boundaries’ this is amplified through our use of narrative and performance aspects.The front cover signifies, De Saussure, an immersive atmosphere which is an ideology taken from her mission statement, she ‘creates a unique and immersive environment for her audience’. On the inside panel the photos depicted create an ordinary atmosphere, Dyer,  for her audience and her Star Image is represented as present and relatable as well as fun and individualistic. The artist’s SMP includes photos to represent her individual personality, charity posts for women’s refuge which is a women’s charity conveying her beliefs further, and her political views on feminism which are posted on her page tie together the sense of femininity which runs from the Mission Statement through the Digipak, Music Video and SMP.

Social Media Page Draft 2

Our social media page

Screencastify Feedback

Targets for improvement :

To improve our social media page my first step will be to change the year of the tour for our artists new album, secondly we change the ‘veiws’ story, we will then need to post about the new album dropping and we could potentially do this by using our Digipak. This will be followed on by another merchandise release potentially in the form of something other than clothes to differentiate between our star’s general merchandise and the merchandise for this particular album. We will then need to add in another link to Spotify for the release of her new album and a link to the song ‘me and my husband’.

Final DP Draft

The Final Draft for our Digipak

 

Reflection –

Since our third draft we have increases the font size of ‘artificial’, made the ’emmarie’ a serif font to add elegance, made the ‘satisfaction’ another colour, changed the background colour of the inside left and included the title of the CD and our Star’s name on the right in the inside to promote her further.

Our Digipak follows the typical conventions of our genre, Indie, through the use of bright colours which are present in the font throughout the Digipak as well as the chosen colours on the inner left pane. During the initial planning process of our Digipak we moved more towards the alternative style of Indie, this meant that we could be more creative with our Digipak. During the planning stage we chose to represent the sense of a journey and moving on which we encoded, Dyer, on final panel by having our Star be surrounded by objects such as boxes and old vinyl records. On the Front panel she is lit by low-key, chiaroscuro lighting which is to draw all of the attention onto her face and highlight shadows for depth, we chose green and orange card which we placed over the main light to therefore add some soft colour. The use of a main prop on the front cover was to imply a dangerous side to our Star as fire is often a signifier, De Saussure, of power and danger. The size of the Masthead conveys dominance and the use of the colour green is an accent colour of the left side of her face, the use of the Pink in the Emmarie is an accent colour of the ‘Satisfaction’ and we chose to use pink because it connotes femininity and love which is a running theme throughout the Digipack as the font on the inside right and back panel is pink as well as the background on the inside left. For the photos on the inside left of the Digipak we used Barthes symbolic code to represent the Star’s personality, this allows our Star to be represented as ordinary and real which was important for our Social Media Page as well as our Digipak. Throughout our Digipak the Indie genre is represented, it is colourful and positive and the audience is first drawn in through the eyeline match on the first panel. Our Digipak represents femeninity, power and moving forward as well as the Indie genre.

Digipak Draft 3

Our Digipak Draft 3

Since the second Draft we have changed the font colour and font of the Masthead and the colour of the font on the ’emmarie’ as well as the font on that too. the inside left now includes more photos as well as a backing colour and lyrics from our music video. This ties the Digipack together nicely and brightens it because of the extra colour. Next I think it would be best to make the ‘Satisfaction’ in the Masthead a different colour because at the moment it is not as eye-catching as it should be, we could also increase the font size of the ‘artificial’ to make it stand out of the page.

 

Timeline and Marketing ideas

The Timeline for our Instagram page

Sandbox Marketing Ideas

These marketing ideas from sandbox I found would be the most appropriate for us to gather ideas for in our marketing for our specific star and genre, this is because they use social media and other forms of media to market their songs or artistry. The three pictured above will give us great ideas in how we can use our social media page to market and gain attention.

Digipak Draft 2

Our Digipak Draft 2

Screencastify notes from the teacher –

For our Digipak the next thing that we would like to add would be a more elegant and smaller font on the ’emmarie’ in the bottom right corner. This would be to enhance the femininity of the front cover as the font colour is pink. Overall the middle panel and back panel capture and portray the message that we would like them to and we are extremely happy with all of the photos in our Digipak. For our next Draft we would like to change the Masthead colour and the font type of ’emmarie’ to make the front cover pop out more.

Digipak Draft 1

Due to our star being ill on the day of our shoot we gathered images of ideas that we wanted to incorporate into our own Digipak. For our front page we want to use a lowkey, green and orange lighting to represent the unique, emotional and raw side of her music. Following this we have chosen to have a medium long shot for our back cover, we want her whole body to be in it to juxtapose the mid/close up shot on the front cover. We also want to use one key prop in the front cover and a few props for the back cover. We want it to be minimalist but tell a story at the same time and we hope to portray her emotional and ordinary side as a Star through our digipak.

Peer Feedback

The feedback given by one of my peers on our 3rd draft of our music video

This feedback really helped my group to gain an insight into what we were achieving in our music video and what needed to be worked upon, there was acknowledgement of the repetitiveness of the day to day life and many other aspects that we were aiming to convey were portrayed efficiently. The feedback we have got to work on was similar to some of the things our group had previously discussed which was beneficial as this feedback made it obvious that we could improve it further. We booked another performance shoot and shot at various angles to get more life into our music video and we also made the clips shorter to make it more interesting and less dreary. Overall this exercise highlighted how our group could improve some finishing touches into our music video.