After seeing what I need to improve from my teacher, I have got a few things I need to change and add to help make my magazine appeal more to my audience. I will make sure to apply the improvements for my final draft, so I can have more success when creating my magazine.
What’s new:
Front cover:
- I changed the colour of the font to white and blue.
- I made the main cover star smaller.
- I made the text placement more centred.
- I made “the big three” bigger.
Contents page:
- I changed the look of the font.
- I made the fonts white.
- I put social media in a different place.
- I made the page numbers smaller.
Double page spread:
- I changed the page number to a different colour.
- I added the title of who its by.
What I need to improve:
Front cover:
- Needs a plug.
- Add a date.
- Add an artist with the typeface.
- Make “Max” bigger and in a different colour.
- “The big three” get rid of “the” and make “big” bigger and change the colour of the font.
Contents page:
- Make the cover star black and white featured on the first page of the contents page.
- Make sure the pages featured corrispond with the contents page.
- Centre the words in the middle.
- Change spacing between words and page numbers.
- Add a quote for the cover star on the first page of contents page.
- Check for typos.
- Change the questions so it’s not all about Max.
Double page spread:
- Make the page numbers smaller.
- Organise the boxes with the three stars so they don’t overlap, make quotes bigger and centre them.
- Make photoes look less squashed and make them taller.
- Featured article questions put them in lower case.
- Typo in one of the questions.