Final Targets

We received this targets from our teacher for our final thriller. These final tweaks we will make on our draft 4.

Transient

  • Edit of the title– zoom into head then title on black THEN kit walking downstairs – the sequencing is a bit weird at the moment
  • Make sure you are only using the drunk effect on POV shots otherwise it’s weird. This effect works quite well expect on the walking down the stairs inside the market shot (before they are running) where it’s quite nauseating as that shot is long.
  • Can you put a cut to black at the end just to finish off the sequence.
  • That wall that kit is next to looks nothing like the wall he’s then running next to- it therefore becomes more of a hindrance than a help.

We will take the constructive comments onboard and improve our thriller before the final export.

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