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This is my double-page spread. I have made using photos from my second shoot and combined the pictures I took with the draft article I wrote to create a realistic-looking double-page spread. In order to improve it for the next draft I have made a reflection of what went well, what went wrong, and what I like about it;

5 Targets:

• Improve the background as the background is very simple and the white gradient makes the text hard to see
• Maybe choose a different font for the article
• Add a quote from later in the article somewhere to help attract readers attention
• Move the “Exclusive with Andrew Guille” as it is very close to the page numbers
• Add a byline that includes the photographer.

3 things I like:

• The image looks very well-suited for the genre
• The opening paragraphs of the article fit well on the page
• The title font looks very good.

5 What I need to do:

• I need to improve the background
• I need to have a look at different fonts for the article
• I need to try moving either the page numbers or the title
• I need to add a byline that includes the photographer
• I need to find a suitable quote to put on the double-page spread.