This is the feedback we have been given on our first draft of our social media page by our teacher. She has raised many good points that will be taken into consideration whilst we create the second draft. Some of the most important points include:

• Answer some more questions
• Work up to the release of the album including the video
• Try to use cross-media-convergence
• Try to get some collaboration or merchandise

Targets for the second draft:

• Ensure we have a call to action in some of our posts
• Include more information on the posts about each band member
• Tease the music video
• Make more posts with more variety