This is a rough cut of our performance edited. It is not the full song just over a minute of it however it is all synced with the song and edited with the beat.

Things I think we did well:

•  We got a lot of footage of the drummer
• We got a lot of footage of the chorus and singing it
• We had very good mise-en-scene
• The outfits fit the song and star image very well
• The lip syncing was in time
• The acting is convincing throughout most of the footage

Things we could improve:

• Get more footage of singing the end of the song
• Get some more footage of the bass
• Get some footage for the opening of the song
• Stop the high shot from being slightly wobbly
• Get more angles on all the instruments
• Try to avoid anything showing up in the frame that shouldn’t be there.

Looking forward I believe that I can use everything that I have learned from this shoot to have a good narrative shoot that captures all of the footage that we need. For example I now know about some good angles to use and how to get my models and actors to perform in front of the camera better.