This is my second draft on my contents page. For this I looked at my peer assessment and 5 main points and corrected them. They were…
- The main writing for what’s on each page needs to be in a different colour as it is too similar to the other.
- There is too much of the word contents.
- Needs to get rid of one of the contents titles.
- Needs to add in more pugs and plugs to show the audience different and exciting things happening in the magazine.
- Need more images of models.
For future drafts I want to…
- Possibly change the background so it isn’t so bland to look at.
- Add something to the bottom of the page to make it more interesting than just two lines.
- I may add a background to the image of the model on the top and left.
- I also might change the image on the bottom left.