This is my second draft on my contents page. For this I looked at my peer assessment and 5 main points and corrected them. They were…

• The main writing for what’s on each page needs to be in a different colour as it is too similar to the other. 
• There is too much of the word contents. 
• Needs to get rid of one of the contents titles. 
• Needs to add in more pugs and plugs to show the audience different and exciting things happening in the magazine. 
• Need more images of models.

For future drafts I want to…

• Possibly change the background so it isn’t so bland to look at.
• Add something to the bottom of the page to make it more interesting than just two lines.
• I may add a background to the image of the model on the top and left.
• I also might change the image on the bottom left.