For this draft of my contents page, I tried simplifying everything to see what it looked like because I think that the first draft had too much stuff on the page. In the first draft, I used a lightning bolt down the middle of the page to put the contents on but this, combined with all of the bubbles that I added, and the background colours, it was difficult to focus on one thing. So this time, I removed all of these factors, which may have been a bit far.

For my third draft:

– I think I should keep the same layout as the second draft but add something back to make the page seem more interesting.

– I will make the background a more intersting colour again, maybe by using the gradient tool again as one solid colour looks uninteresting.

– I will make sure to fill any empty gaps in the page.