Second Draft Of Double-Page Spread
Here is the second draft of my magazine’s double-page spread:
What’s New?
- I tweaked the headline to ‘MIND AND MATTER’, and changed the colour of the ‘AND’ to a complimentary colour of green.
- My article is added and laid out in columns, a complimentary coloured box is positioned behind the website so that it stands out to the readers.
- I took the pull quote out of the article as I felt the article didn’t need breaking up, so I’ve placed it by the model instead.
- I’ve added a light complimentary coloured outer glow to my model to give her more definition.
What’s Next?
- I feel like I need to change the title to something relating to the article like ‘Feeling The Beat / Music / Vibrations’ as at the moment it doesn’t quite fit so changing it will be better for the target audience.
- I might make my pull quote bigger and position it further down on my model, then add a box above it either talking about the outfit or linking social media’s so that I fill the empty space.
- I’m going to see whether a background colour is needed as white is a bit plain.
- Finally, I need to add a standfirst and a by line.