Here is draft 4 of our music video:
In order to create some targets for our next draft we asked our peers to watch our video and we were then able to gather some feedback.
Summary of the feedback given:
- They liked the lighting in the performance shots and thought this contrasted well with the darkness of the narrative.
- They understood the narrative and took our preferred reading.
- We should work to ensure that clips aren’t repeated and overused.
We also received some helpful feedback from our teacher:
Targets:
- Fix the colour and brightness on some shots of Millie.
- Slow the pace of the shots where Millie is shaking her head.
- Experiments with slowing down the ending when the hand reaches out towards the camera or we could perhaps fade the clip to black.
- Scale and frame the performance shots in the bunker differently so they are less repetitive and more interesting.