December 19

Feedback & Reflection on Draft DPS

I got some feedback from my teachers and peers on the things that I could change and need to improve on.

  • Space out columns of writing as too close
  • Get rid of hyphens
  • Change the blue font as it could be hard to read
  • Bigger page numbers
  • Justifying text could make it look neater
  • Check line spacing is equal
  • Maybe add a logo on the guitar to personalize
  • Zoom in the image in slightly to make her bigger

I have taken all of these suggestions into consideration and will make changes accordingly.

 


Posted 19th December 2019 by zoecollins in category Music Magazine

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