Here is my new improved magazine draft that I have completed after listening to my teacher’s past feedback.
My teachers last improvements she believes I need to make are:
FRONT PAGE
- Make cover lines more bold to stand out more to the reader.
- Add lines to pug to make it more interesting and detailed.
- The spacing between “Confidence is key” should be closer together.
CONTENTS PAGE
- Photos need captions to know who they are.
- Only need one Kira K picture.
- Numbers to pages in green or purple.
DOUBLE PAGE SPREAD
- Add more quotes in remaining boxes on top of main picture.
- Justify text to the right in the boxes.
- Tone down opacity of background as it makes the text hard to read.
- Make page numbers a larger number.