These are my complete drafts for my music magazine as they still have a few improvements that my teacher has set for me to change so I can be happy with my finished designs.
This is the screen castify my teacher completed for me so that I know what amendments and improvements to make to my music magazine to make it as successful as possible.
These are the improvements my teacher set:
- FRONT COVER
- Make title more bold by adding stroke around.
- Bring down all headlines associated with my star “Kira K” to beneath her name.
- Write down who says quotes.
- List the pop stars included in magazine so consumer knows they’re getting what their paid for.
- Add gold to ‘Collectors Addition’ pug
- Make barcode smaller and move price to the right hand side.
- Add banner to the space at the bottom
- Change name to Kira K as it’s more youthful and interesting
- CONTENTS
- ‘Who really is she’- state who, add page number that the image relates to.
- Change photo on bottom right because it’s too similar to main star image.
- Add thick borders around the images and make sure they all include page numbers.
- DOUBLE PAGE SPREAD
- Move image down so the title doesn’t cover the model.
- Enlarge the page numbers towards the bottom.
- Make the standfirst in big bold letters and put the drop capital at the start of the article.
- Include byline for the photography image.
- Include information/text/quotes in boxes over image.
- Make the quotes in the article white or put them in normal size with a break.
- A few hyphens that I need to remove.
- Change colour of background to a green or light pink.