I chose to compare our music video with this because i feel as if they are very similar in some aspects and there is little contrast between the performance, the narrative and the locations in which they shot.

What they did well:

• This group used a variety of shot distances that allowed them to capture a strong lighting that conveys with their narrative and performance.
• Secondly they have put in strong transitions that demonstrate a good understanding of what works well where.
• Finally they have been able to achieve a good clear understanding of what the narrative is and conveyed this in their video

What we need to improve:

• As a group we must identify the issues with our narrative and make it clear and easy to read for the audience
• We need to use a selection of transitions in our video that maintain the grungy feel but adds a variety for the audience to enjoy.
• We must ensure that all of our lip syncing is matched and in time with the song.
• We must always consider Mis En Scene when filming and editing to make sure that we have the best lighting, transitions and costumes that we can offer.