The rough cut is all of the shots that we acquired from the day of filming put into order, so as to provide narrative and to have a clear outline of any shots that we needed to shoot on the second day of filming in order to fill the gaps that we left from the first day of filming. By making a narrative rough cut we are also able to have an idea of what we will need to do when we reach the editing stage of producing our thriller. I feel as if the narrative rough cut was successful in serving its purpose of making clear what we needed to do in order to form complete narrative sense, improve our thriller and gives us an insight into the obstacles that we would have to tackle in the editing stage.

Improvements that are to be made are:

  • Fill the gaps in the narrative.
  • add tension and atmosphere.
  • Make a clear antagonist to add to the tension and atmosphere of our thriller.