Draft of Front Page and Self Assessment

The first draft for the front cover of my music magazine.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Self Assessment. For my magazine I have assessed it on a google slide, here you can see what I would change and do differently or better, then also what I think worked effectively. This self assessment in necessary as it’s a good way to reflect appropriately on the pro’s and con’s of my magazine. I can also use this as a guideline for my future drafts and final piece.

Below is my self assessment of my first draft:

Overall I feel I see a lot of ways to improve my cover, I have learnt different techniques and have learnt more about the design of a cover through some experience, which is good. 5 specific targets I have to improve are;

Find a better quality photo

Get a photo that represents my brand and photo even better

More persuasive language in my cover lines whilst keeping them short and snappy

Add a little more colour to find a more exciting hip-hop aesthetic

Find or make a better more exciting background to make the cover less basic and boring

 

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