Above is a screencastify of our first draft done by our teacher. He speaks about the positives and also the things we need to target and improve.
Our targets for improvement are –
- Make a post about a charitable cause, preferably mental health as we can link to out song well
- Needs more posts (at least 10)
- Add links in the post so the audience knows where to purchase the tickets/merchandise from
- Provide more information on our posts about what we’re posting
- Look at real artists posts for some inspiration
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