In this task I created my 2nd daft of my contents page. In this task I really focused on improving on my first draft by taking risks. As this is my second draft I decided to attempt new style and change my colour scheme.

The first difference you may notice on this draft is the change in colour. In my first draft I used dark blue and yellow. Looking back at this, I have released this was a bad decision. Not only is yellow and dark blue hard to read in parts, but they do not follow any conventions of a rap magazine. It also portrays a dark and gloomy feel. To fix this I have decided to use more bright colors, for example the red and light blue. This connotes a better feel to the page and the overall magazine.

Another thing I adjusted is the design in the background. I think this basic design is aesthetically pleasing and ‘clean’. I am happy with the draft but I must improve on it.

In my next draft I need to focus on adding more detail onto the page as at the moment it is quite empty and bland. Another thing I need to do is even out the text’s distance between them.