This is the new draft of my DPS:

What’s changed?

• I created a pink faded box for my article so it would all be seen
• I made my picture more dramatic by adding lots of special effects on it
• I changed the colour of my drop capital
• I faded out my picture from the left to right for drama
• I gave my models head an outline so people could get eye contact from the model straight away

What’s next?

• I need to change the colour of my models eyes
• I need to move my model so she isn’t covering the Title
• I need to move my credits closer to the middle of the magazine
• I need to move my page numbers in more
• I need to give more colour to my pink box

Targets:

• To change the colour of my models eyes
• To move my model so she isn’t covering the Title
• To move my credits closer to the middle of the magazine
• To move my page numbers in more
• To give more colour to my pink box